Beach Bay

Once upon a time there were 3 children. Their names were Ben, Cooper and Bob. They lived in a rainforest. Every day they have to get to Goulburn street school by boat in a river full of electric eels. On one of the trips to school the boys forgot to take food with them. It was 12 o’clock and school starts at 1. Then Cooper fell overboard. Ben dived into the water to rescue him. Bob, who was only 5 years old, stayed on the boat by himself. He was scared. Then Ben and Cooper came out of the water just in time because it was only 10 minutes for them to get to school. The River had taken them away from their track. It looked like they were lost and they started to get hungry. Finally after they got out of the water they found an aeroplane. How lucky! They arrived just in time for their lessons.                                                                                                                                                                      The end.

12 thoughts on “Beach Bay

  1. What a great story Matthew! I’m so glad the eels did not get any of the boys – I hate eels! I think they are creepy – so they were a good choice for a scary story! Wouldn’t it be awful if you REALLY had to get to school that way?

  2. Hi Matthew,
    Beach Bay looks like a huge success and its a wonder they didn’t get zapped and I’m happy they didn’t as well. Are you thinking of writing more stories?

  3. Hi Matthew
    I really like your story. How long do Cooper and Ben stay in the water?
    But what about the food? Do they starve or get food?
    You really have been doing lots of commenting! Don’t you get tired?

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