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Create a POEM

August 1, 2017 by lbonde   

Look at this photo that I took.  Write three lines in the comments box that might be good for a poem about this idea.  Remember all of the things you know about free verse poems.  NO RULES

 

 


22 Comments »

  1. riv19emily says:

    I think that these would be good lines:
    Big terrifying lion crouching in the grass
    Watching prey slowly
    Pounce! It grabs the gazelle

    Emily

  2. riv19callie says:

    Huge majestic lion approaching her prey,
    Stalking through the long grass,
    Loud groaning stomach

  3. riv19ruby says:

    Fluffy ginger fur, his ears pointed listening to his surroundings,
    Big, sharp and scary teeth hidden but ready for capturing its prey,
    Eyeing off another lion to see who will get the prey first.
    Ruby

  4. riv19amber says:

    Scary noises surrounding me.
    Animal on bright green grass.
    Trees blowing here and there and everywhere.
    AMBER

  5. riv19sophie says:

    smart lion watching his pray,
    getting ready to pounce,
    SNATCH,
    he has got his lunch.
    Sophie

  6. riv19izzy says:

    Young ferocious lion
    Sneaking around
    Looking for pray
    Ready to pounce
    Interesting
    Loud blowing wind whistling through the air
    Dangerous

  7. riv19mitchell says:

    My first phrase is cold cosy fur.My second phrase is walking with the warm misty air.My last phrase is wet floppy ears.
    Mitchell

  8. riv19mia says:

    scary, ferocious lion
    thick, fluffy fur
    about to pounce
    walking around the river

    Mia p

  9. riv19lily says:

    loud roaring in my ears
    pouncing around
    looking for pray
    terrifying

  10. riv19poppy says:

    Stalking, searching,
    Soft growls rumbling,
    Stern, concentrated expresson.
    Poppy

  11. riv19hamza says:

    loud furry predator
    roaring louder than anything
    Hamza

  12. riv19scarlett says:

    huge mysterious tiger watched me,
    loud,
    pouncing.
    by Scarlett

  13. riv19jack says:

    stealthy, quiet
    rustling grass low,
    vicious,tempted lion

    jack

  14. riv19amy says:

    big brown fluffy fox in the forest
    sneaking up on its pray
    sleeping after its big day
    Amy

  15. riv19lacey says:

    stalking praying vicious tiger,
    loud scary pouncing tiger,
    growling hungry tiger

  16. riv19sienna says:

    limping,hungry tiger trying to sense prey as evening wind stokes her fur

    Sienna

  17. riv19euan says:

    Big majestic lion stalking towards its prey
    Focusing
    POUNCE!
    Euan

  18. riv19miab says:

    king of the jungle walking my way,
    big, tough, brave
    looking for its prey
    Mia.b

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